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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-09-15 08:11 PM

Does She Like Me

Looking at her,
I like what I see.
Its called a
physical attraction.
Without that attraction,
we pass by like
two ships in the night.
With that attraction
comes a look, a reaction,
a response or interaction.
When you meet someone new,
you have barely a clue
as to what thoughts
might be going through
their heart, their head,
as to what lies ahead,
all you know is that
you like what you see,
and you think to yourself,
"I like her, but I
wonder if she likes me."

JamesLee
September15
2005
Just thinking of
the process of
liking someone.
I know that she
likes me...

© Copyright 2005 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2005-09-15 08:13 PM

Thanks for the reminder. It's been so long I couldn't recall.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

2 posted 2005-09-15 08:54 PM

This is Beautiful.. A true poet right there.. This is the kind of stuff that I really enjoy... Thanks!!!! So much for sharing.......

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-09-15 08:56 PM

Wonderful write James...but, why don't you just ask her?

Hugs~Nancy

I wait now at the lake or walking by the bay
I wait and listen or put a seashell
to my ear and it all comes back
the wind's soft murmur..and you.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2005-09-20 06:15 PM

LOL at Larry's reply
now, go and read Jaime Fradera's recent post, as YOU are "in it", so-to-speak

LyricFetish
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since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

5 posted 2005-09-20 11:50 PM

I really liked this. Simple, well written, and everyone can relate. I especially liked the part about passing by "like two ships in the night".

*Meredith

I'm not your type,
I'm not inflatable.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2005-09-21 03:29 AM

That's so true, JamesLee. It is almost always physical first. That is why this internet dating thing baffles me....lol.

.....jo

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2005-09-21 09:35 AM

Good for you, that you know, dear James!

This is lovely!

Enjoyed.
Love,
Margherita

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