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Professor Gloom
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of Depression
0 posted 2005-09-15 05:59 PM


The darkness, creeps into me,
Tainting thought, blinding beauty,
There's death dreams, coming at night;
Hopelessness lingers till light.
Can no one shine in me,
Give me your sight.

Gloom


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Larry C
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1 posted 2005-09-15 06:18 PM

I've had nights like that. Can I offer you a life line? Interesting read indeed.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.
Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
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2 posted 2005-09-15 06:50 PM

sad thought .. Sorry to hear gloom.. not such a good thing... Thanks for sharing this...

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura
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