The Last Long Line...(JuJu's vulnerability challenge)

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Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

0 posted 2005-09-15 12:02 PM

Standing in line,
At the pearly gates
By the look of this line
I've got quite a wait.

St Peter's interviews,
Short but sweet,
Is patience a virtue?
Gotta stay upbeat.

Mother Teresea,
In front of me,
We're now at the door,
My heart's at my knees.

Now you know how I am
Just'a lowly Toerag,
Ain't been no angel
But not terribly bad?

Then St. Peter says
To Teresea the Nun:
"You couldda' done more,
Before you were done.

Now being the Toerag
You all know I've been
If he said that to the "Mother"
He ain't lettin' me in!!!

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2005-09-15 12:06 PM

LOL...I guess we will all have to put in a good word for you....The smiles you put on our faces should be enough to get you in without question....A delight to read as always...You sure put a smile on my face...I hope you don't mind that I am printing it off to share with people I know...**big hugs**

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2005-09-15 12:43 PM

Oh my toe. Your so silly.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2005-09-15 12:45 PM

at least you got to get in line!!!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2005-09-15 01:05 PM

Tell you what? I will send up a little prayer for you, that will sure shock him!

Cute and yes, vulnerable as heck!

To see real beauty - look with your heart.
~ Carpe diem ~

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

5 posted 2005-09-15 01:10 PM

Toe,
Thank goodness for grace!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2005-09-15 01:49 PM

I gottatellya, I think ya shouldda thanked yer lucky stars to have even made to the pearly gates! But then again, heaven could use some of that wit and charm of yours.

EA
P.S. Please accept my belated condolences. I did not know that you had passed on.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2005-09-15 05:16 PM

Aw, Toe... what a perfect answer for the challenge! *S* But you're not to worry...

Those pearly gates will open wide!
If you hesitate at the door
Angels will escort you inside
To meet with those who've gone before.
What a reunion that will be
Forever happiness begun...
And if you ask "All this for me?"
The Lord will answer "Toe, well done!"

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2005-09-15 07:52 PM

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

9 posted 2005-09-21 08:28 PM

very good thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

10 posted 2005-09-21 08:34 PM

LMBO This is a good one.

Poetry is beauty in words.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

11 posted 2005-09-21 08:37 PM

Toe, It is soo great to see you again and to smile at your words! Miss you round here fella

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

12 posted 2005-09-23 04:24 PM

I love this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

13 posted 2005-09-26 01:21 PM

i liked that last part LMAO

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