Walking Forward II - Unwanted Reflections

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Open Poetry #36

Walking Forward II - Unwanted Reflections

JesusChristPose
Senior Member

since 2005-06-21

Posts 777
Pittsburgh, Pa

0 posted 2005-09-14 09:15 PM

The new found path
The old void's wrath
Thoughts laced in pain
The gone insane

The winding trail
Search for the grail
Memories hound
Thoughts turn to sound

Life up ahead
In pursuit, dread
Cursing the mind
Peace lost behind

Future to pass
Smell of green grass
Turned brown then died
Green on one side

Walk forward, still
Power sheds will
What was behind
Creeps into mind

The hallowed hall
Character flaw
Praise be its shame
Forgive all blame

"If this grand panaorama before me is what you call God... then God is not dead."

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

1 posted 2005-09-14 09:20 PM

Awesome poem. Written with such great feeling.

Poetry is beauty in words.

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

2 posted 2005-09-14 09:48 PM

Yes, very well said and well from what you feel from different things .. Thanks for sharing

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2005-09-14 10:31 PM

you've a big heart and it shows....you'll make it with flying colors, I have no doubt...

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands
~~**~~

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