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Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2005-09-14 01:26 PM

static clings
no matter how many
fabric softner sheets
I use obsessively
turn down the volume
one last time
as I lie the disappointments down
shutting out
the lullaby's
I don't believe
in whatever it was
I believed
when I first met you
I don't care
if I just shut it out
I realize finally
what life is all about
and I can't breathe
So what if
I stand before you
in Drama Queen fashion
I'm just not who
you think I am
I'm not the saviour
of your heart
nor your addiction
suffocate the lies
drown
Prince Charming
is a joke
he doesn't exist
because you don't exist...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-09-14 01:28 PM

Wow! Powerful write here Kristen!
Well said...very well done!
Hugs~Nancy

I wait now at the lake or walking by the bay
I wait and listen or put a seashell
to my ear and it all comes back
the wind's soft murmur..and you.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-09-14 01:40 PM

I'm not the saviour
of your heart
nor your addiction
suffocate the lies
drown
Prince Charming
is a joke
he doesn't exist
because you don't exist...

Boy, does this strike home! Well done indeed. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

3 posted 2005-09-14 02:51 PM

this is very well said and done.. thanks for sharing this...

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2005-09-14 03:36 PM

Wow, great writing!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2005-09-14 05:53 PM

Kristen, I know that you have been experiencing many trials by fire, but you will get through them. A lesser woman would be totally overwhelmed.

I can sense your strength in this impassioned piece of writing.

"I stand before you
in Drama Queen fashion"

~ Been there! Done that! lol

"I'm not the saviour
of your heart
nor your addiction
suffocate the lies
drown
Prince Charming
is a joke
he doesn't exist
because you don't exist..."

~ Whew! That vent must have made you feel better! It's good to let it out or you might explode into a thousand smithereens!

Hugs with love,
Linda

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