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Open Poetry #36
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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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0 posted 2005-09-13 04:36 PM


On The Edge


We lived on the edge,
exhilarated by the view.

Then,
true to form,
you stumbled and fell.

You dropped
spread-eagled
into the rising wind,
eyes closed in ecstasy

and never saw me wave
goodbye.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)
© Copyright 2005 Nancy Wilcox - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2005-09-13 05:30 PM

Nice writing...James
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2005-09-13 06:23 PM

love it Nan...


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Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
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just out of reach
3 posted 2005-09-13 07:27 PM

Perfect !  Loved this.  Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg
iliana
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4 posted 2005-09-13 10:17 PM

Nancy, this is great!   ....jo
Angelheart
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5 posted 2005-09-13 10:40 PM

thanks for sharing this, it was good..  
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