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He, Siren
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He, Siren |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
She is wine tasted slow over sensitive crevices of thought and tongue with closed eye prayers whispered spirits along the spine in candle light at midnight his tears ahce a longing that begs fulfillment she answers his call unaware of the fall sweet the quake of songs sung along hidden places of heart oh, how his lips part just so and the nectar of his breath inspire a craving deep within his beautiful eyes there is love kissed with sadness if only, she thinks, if only this love... and he touches, just enough to make her stay just enough to hold sway just enough for another day she is the wine of his furtile thoughts tasted slow yes, he will share with whispers enticing the senses invitingly once you care, ensnared... ~tier [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (09-13-2005 05:24 PM).] |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is heady. Beautiful. You have a couple of typos that detracted a little from it, but all in all, this is intoxicating. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
<>Thank you Nan, *hugs* ~tier  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
every line touched me~~ M |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
very thick and beautiful.. |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Beautiful! The poetry in that was well delivered and completely heartfelt...well...that is to say...my heart felt it! Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine |
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