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The Bells
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The Bells |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Bells I heard the seven bells of tell They danced upon my spine a spell Sound the chaos of their song Made my feet to dance along Visions ran the length of it Hope rang out the strength of it And I was slipped the needles eye And brought into a nether sigh So raged the winds of livings roar I could not bring my mind to store The Eden’s lace that since is grime To give me grace, go back in time I could not wrap its cloak my frame Nor set aside the wrath of blame Nor silence it the quell of tell Nor stop my tingling spine as well So here I stay in quandaries lies And add my say the well of sighs |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I could not wrap its cloak my frame Nor set aside the wrath of blame Nor silence it the quell of tell Nor stop my tingling spine as well So here I stay in quandaries lies And add my say the well of sighs ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ your rhymes always ching my chimes and ring my bells.   I heard the seven bells of tell They danced upon my spine a spell yer so kewl *S* *ww*    |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jm, Well you sure ching my chimes as well. WW |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
very interesting write....thanks for sharing... Poetry can get you very far |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Angelheart Thank you for the read and comment. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"So raged the winds of livings roar I could not bring my mind to store The Eden’s lace that since is grime To give me grace, go back in time" Sy, I was just reading a gnostic website last night called The Church of the Pearl. When I read the lines above, I was immediately transported back to some things I read there. My thinking, too. Beautifully phrased, sir!  ......jo |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful write Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Thank you for the lovely reply. scorpio Thank you my friend. |
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