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My Hero
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My Hero |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going 
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Written while listening to the Foo Fighters "Hero" and after reading Juju's article about the little boy in St. Louis. My Hero He leads with unimaginable burden gleaming within the horizon's brush stroke lighted only by a ruined city scape holding the future at his sides and in his arms he is my hero yet much younger than i and still more courageous he is my hero still just a child yet more adult than I the light within darkness of disaster he burns bright with hope. -John nice use of muffin |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
Aaww and a wonderful hero at that  Thanks for sharing....Poetry can get you very far |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
John, Very nicely done. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
Sounds like you got yourself a good hero to me. Awesome poem. Poetry is beauty in words. |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going |
Thank you all for the responses. Just to clarify and right my mistake. The poem is about the little boy in Juju's article in the lounge forum. I typed St. Louis instead of Louisiana. I always get those places mixed up even though they are completely different. Anyway, thank you all for stopping by and meeting my hero. nice use of muffin |
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Obsidian Snow Member
since 2005-08-24
Posts 88 |
The Foo Fighters are my favorite and both those CD's are great! and so is this poem and who you wrote it about.. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
That is so nice of you. I hope this message makes its way to see him. -Juju |
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