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Professor Gloom
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of Depression
0 posted 2005-09-12 10:18 PM

I feel dark, not just the chill, but the lack, the missing light;
And it sooths, there can be thrill in the black, but mostly not.
It aids me, lets me be soon forgot when passing deep in the night.


Gloom


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Member Patricius
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just out of reach
1 posted 2005-09-12 10:48 PM

I think I am beginning to really dig this form. Awesome Gloom.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg
Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
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2 posted 2005-09-12 10:51 PM

well so glad you are night and this is a good one here...thanks for sharing

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura
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