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Very seducive emotion
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Very seducive emotion |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA 
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(puff) I see you there love me I see you there touch me I gotta go whereever you are gotta go where-ever you run you gotta be there right beside me you better go before your eyes you better hope that i can touch you right beneath the skies I say you love I say you love I say you love YOu better watch out where you go you better watch out before you run you better right before your eyes you better see if I am going to run after you you better see it you better feel it my love cant cant be wrong You better love it You better need it cause I am prove you wrong I gonna get you I am going to fly you up to the sky you better hold it with your love you better hold it with your love cause i am going to prove I am going to prove you wrong I am going to prove you wrong I am going to prove you wrong you better watch out for your eyes you better hope you dont touch the sky cause I'm going to hold you I am going to hold you day and nite You better watch out for your eyes I am going to prove you wrong |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
This was so beautifully written. I could feel the emotion in this piece. Poetry is beauty in words. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
reads just like a song...a beautiful one |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
Passing, It is a song and I can sing the lyrics to it. thanks for your wonderful response  |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
great poem/song angelheart you rock -may the force be with you in poetry |
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