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The Tear
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The Tear |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Re write: The Tear I marvel at the tears display A muse that fills my head Of all the passions brought to play The recipe of wed How of each or more of one Compose the salty clear And why the mix when all is done Collected in a tear Emotions clearly make the flame That simmers in its plight The choir rings of joy and blame To bring about its bite Shaped into elliptic splendor When pregnant full and ripe In spite its source, even gender And gone in just one swipe Enough have fallen human dwell To surely squelch the flame of hell |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Shaped into elliptic splendor When pregnant full and ripe In spite its source, even gender And gone in just one swipe Enough have fallen human dwell To surely squelch the flame of hell" Well you would think so Sy..so many tears have been shed. Very well written and much enjoyed the read this sunny Sunday.  &  , Nancy |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderfully written Sy. The last lines are very profound. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy Glad the sun shines for you today. Earth Angel Sorry I made you cry. A for each tear.scorpio Thank you my friend. |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
thanks for sharing this...it was good.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Angelheart Good is food when understood. Thank you |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Tears do have many different grains of salt .... giving flavors to those living, ... savoring a wise tear here, good piece! CT A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ctowen Glad you enjoyed, thank you. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Enough have fallen human dwell To surely squelch the flame of hell" Amen to that, Sy. Brilliant lines!  ....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Thank you my friend. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: A tear described by you acquires new beauty, dear Seymour. Simply beautiful! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita For that you get an extra |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Enough have fallen human dwell To surely squelch the flame of hell" balance....a wishful balance.  Loved this Sy. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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