Open Poetry #36 |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia ![]() |
I look at buildings in the street Some are plain and some are neat Some are dirty some are clean All just places that are seen And I thought, it’s just like we With nothing on or mask to see With hair that’s brushed or still asleep The image is what others keep For we can wander in a store To see what others saw before Decide if we’ll return or not Take with us the things we got? With people we can speak and learn Of circumstance and true concern Find a treasure or a slum And wonder what we’ve all become So It’s nice to see a store that’s clean A person with a smile, not mean But neither one, until inside Can bear itself so we’ll decide |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rick, A very good write, enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent thoughts here Rick...enjoyed the read! ![]() Hugs~Nancy Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
This is very good..I really liked this write..Thanks for sharing.... ![]() |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Yes, it's important to seize the opportunity to speak and learn ... Good thoughts here. Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
there are a few that sure do stand out and they are so nice to look at, aren't they? good write, my friend |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
To you all my friends, again thank you so much for sharing some time here with me, all your replies are very, very much appreciated and treasured, till again, be well you all and take good care. Sincerely Rick |
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