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Open Poetry #36
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Beki
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since 1999-09-15
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Newport Beach, CA, USA
0 posted 2005-09-11 03:17 AM

Kelp fingers wash ashore
in silver moonlight -
singing tide rushes in,
slips out again in quiet tones.

My heart yearns for you,
Even as you walk away.
© Copyright 2005 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
1 posted 2005-09-11 04:55 AM

Ebbing .... I could feel your release ...

very nice touch

CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ...  CTOwen/05

              

[This message has been edited by ctowen (09-11-2005 07:43 PM).]
Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
2 posted 2005-09-11 05:04 PM

THIS WAS VERY GOOD I LIKE IT..
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2005-09-11 06:03 PM

Beki
A sensitive write.
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