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Fair Rose... |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
If I from you one prize could earn What would it be that I would yearn? ‘Tis only this and nothing more, From you Fair Rose, I would ask for. A kiss, a kiss, a single kiss, For this I’d brave the dark abyss, For but one kiss upon the cheek, Is all from you that I would seek. To feel your lips against my face, To feel soft touch of angel’s grace, Aye, but one kiss and nothing more, I’d seek from you, my heart’s adore. And in return, I'd give you this, A kiss, a kiss, a single kiss. Fair Rose, how would I kiss thee dear? I would kiss thee lightly on thy brow, As whisper softly in thine ear, Sweet words of love to thee avow. A rising warmth as lips in yearning meld, Tender touch of satin rose in warm embrace, Within mine arms, thy gracious charms in passion held, Thou art the light of heaven's grace, Sweet taste of honeyed mead, desire's delight, Dear Cecilia, music springs from forth thy breast, Doth soothe my pain in glow of Luna's light, As sate my inner fire, love's desire, mine lover's quest. Fair Rose, to thee I make this mortal vow, How would I kiss thee goddess fair? With love and tenderness is how. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We so enjoy these tender mercies... thank you, Sir. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
auh..... -JUju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Musicmaker1969 
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
If you wrote me a poem like this, I'd melt right before your eyes. You are a romantic and whatever woman you wrote this for is very blessed indeed. Well written and so much what women want - tenderness and love. Awesome! Sheri Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You have written the tenderness of longing into music Poet. TD |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I am a sucker for such poems...swooning over here and wishing for the day someone makes me feel this way...the way your poem does If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh.....big sigh. Tim, this is gorgeous! |
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