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Open Poetry #36

Weaping willow Poem

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

0 posted 2005-09-10 07:27 PM

The weaping willow is accross the tree
Humming songs
As happy as can be

The willow is humming about bufferflies going through the grass
What a site of drama coming from this lass
The willow is content
As it is weaping too
It is weaping happy thoughts
That can make dreams come true

The willowhas no name
yet the willow is tame
with the songs that willows make
that is what a wonderful willow takes

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2005-09-10 07:36 PM

This is very creative, dear Angelheart.

A different way to look at the weeping willow!

Beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

2 posted 2005-09-10 11:51 PM

This is a wonderfully written poem. I like your take on the feelings of a weeping willow.

Poetry is beauty in words.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2005-09-11 01:13 AM

Much enjoyed this, Angelheart.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

4 posted 2005-09-11 05:01 AM

we weep in many ways ...

great write

CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

5 posted 2005-09-11 05:40 AM

So true the branches shed and spread and we relate feelings to trees

Hope

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2005-09-11 10:14 AM

I am a big fan of poems that illustrate nature/human correlations! Thank you for this one. I'm smiling!

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

7 posted 2005-09-28 01:40 PM

im adding this to my favorites list>

-may the force be with you in poetry

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