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Silently The Last Tear Falls
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Silently The Last Tear Falls |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan 
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Silently The Last Tear Falls Lying in bed unable to sleep thinking of you my heart its breaking as the last tear falls silently upon my pillow. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhFroggy~ Sometimes the 'silent' is heard so loudly~ Sending  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
froggy, my friend, someone as special as you are should be wooing ~ not woeing! Sending you an extra loving hug, Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well, at least it's the last one that's good now you can move on |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
this is sad .. lol i get it with the whole "wooing and woeing" lmao...hehe..this was good though  |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Froggy Who can take the quality from you Can they ever penetrate horizons they have never seen But you bath in Can they see your vision Can they see your quality Can they see Bodger |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 aw, froggy. How sad. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
In just a few words you traced a scenery of infinite sadness ... I loved Bodger's words: Can they ever penetrate horizons they have never seen The pillows of the world know! May your tears dry, dear froggy! Love and light. Margherita  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Ella Silence is whats left, and of course the track of tears down the face, telling the story of something gone... Your compaction has greatly improved... -------------ice/for ><> |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Froggy.....*hugs*.....you said so much here in so few words....a whole world, actually. Hope everything is alright. .....jo |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Thank-you everyone for the wonderful comments. Jo, I am doing okay. Just took a list of a few words,created this piece. Thank-you all again for the comments. Hugs to each of you. :-) |
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