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One Final Wish
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One Final Wish |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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Once upon this place I stood with good intentions understood... and love was in the air and I was home... now here I sit in solitude of circle cast in heart's protect a stranger in this place I once belonged... no longer is there comfort here no safety from the daggers thrown in misdirected judgments placed upon a weary soul in bleed... and so I grant you one last wish to view my back in exiting I lack the will to play the game... You win... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh Vicky! whatever this may be about, I sure hope this isn't about leaving Pips  (I still remember your open hearted kindness to me when I was a newbie at this site) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vlraynes A very sad write. |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
Ahh!! this is sad ... I hope your arent going to quit.. Poetry is so beautful and expecially when it comes from your heart..Keep it up and you will do well  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh dear Vicky...I do hope you are not leaving!! Please tell me I am wrong. Heart hugs, Nancy~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Gosh   |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I understand how this feels |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Whoa, Vicki! What a write!....know this feeling for sure. ......jo |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Thanks, everyone... for reading and understanding... and no... I'm not 'leaving'... I'm not one to run off because of a few false accusations and unfair judgments... I'm human, though... and so they do tend to hurt... Guess I just had to do something with some of that hurt... so I wrote it... Thanks for bearing with me... and Kacy?... Thank you for sharing that memory... That means more to me than you know... Thanks again, all... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Me Wittle Buddy~ You ain't going nowhere girl ... cause I'd have to come get you (AGAIN)!!!  A poignant penning, Vicky ... I think at times we have all felt some of what you're going through ... but, then again, I can only speak for myself ... and I KNOW I have~ Like you, I'm not a quitter ... so, I buckle up and keep on trucking~  Hey ... I STILL love you~  (but, you already know that) *Huglets* ~*Me*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I'm not one to run off because of a few false accusations and unfair judgments..." ~ Ms. Vicky, I sure am glad to hear that! ~ the you not running off part!!! ~ not the latter half of your statement. That part, I am sad to hear! Gosh, I do understand where you are coming from! When I first started at pip, I had encountered the same thing from another poet and I near cried me a river and felt like quitting. But, I hung in there and am I ever glad that I did! For one thing, I'd have lost out on so many friendships and I surely would not have written the 1,000 poems that I have posted since I joined! I'm relieved that this poem is just a way of you venting. Vent away! ~ but stay!  btw, your poem was very well written and was effective in pulling me right into your emotional whirlwind! Linda |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww Vickie! Tell me who hurt you. I will straighten them out. [This message has been edited by SmartChick (09-10-2005 10:41 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Feeling this and sorry that you had to write it. You know I know just how you feel here and also I love the changes, in between, where you emphasize each word. Nice to see you writing, Vic. [This message has been edited by littlewing (09-12-2005 01:47 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are loved and you write beautifully. Love, Margherita |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge, Earth Angel, SmartChick and Margherita... Thank you all... Sue?... Check your e-mail... "When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace." --Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-11-2005 08:32 PM).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Thank you, Sue...  "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Oh Vicky... This so touched upon my current mood... I find myself questioning why life is like this... anyway.... this takes a trip to the library.. and thank you. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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