Open Poetry #36 |
hiding in disturbances |
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
the doors all seem closed save for a few like traps for the mind with no purpose In all of this madness there must be some sense Could Emily be correct by even some measure? and could that be the path to turn to? Total insanity a mind so frazzled so keen to every sense and situation that the images all come too fast become jumbled unobtainable for more than mere seconds? Questions but no answers. that is how the world works these days. we all spend so much time pondering thinking ourselves to be thinking people but we are so lost in thought that we forget what a maze we are in and that the only way out is to try answering all the questing questions that gallop through our heap littered heads. we pat ourselves on our backs because of the epiphanies we have when really we didn't find them. they were floating around the whole time and we unwittingly stumbled upon them because we weren't paying close enough attention soon enough. I wonder when mine will drift by. "I want to heal, I want to feel, like I'm close to something real" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Temptress The answer is within oneself. It starts and ends with one. Good write |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
I liked this one good job! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Jenn, I'm so glad you made it back here...you've been missed |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Temptress....I just think one drifted by and you penned it here. Great write. .....jo |
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