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That's What Brings Me Back To You (For All Who Lost A Loved One From Katrina) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 That’s What Brings Me Back To You By: Noah Eaton 9/7/05 . . . . . ...is any one of you sick... ...is your faith a candle in the wind... ...is there any pillar on your porch, that can hold you up in this moment of brokenness... ...I know that it never feels right... ...you don’t have to bleed yourself dry... ...may I take the liberty... ...in taking your suffering and griefs, and make them mine tonight... . . . . . ...and it’s you that still rocks the cradle... ...and it’s your warmth I feel in the blue of the moon... ...that’s what brings me back to you...  . . . . . ...when you’re waiting for the parting of the fog... ...when two rights only seem to make it wrong... ...when you want to sing but you can’t remember any song... ...you’re always invited to tag along... . . . . ...the shivering of your hands... ...the sweat pouring from your glands... ...I can understand... ...we are all patients... ...in constant need of help... . . . . . . ...and it’s you that still rocks the cradle... ...and it’s your warmth I feel in the blue of the moon... ...that’s what brings me back to you... . . . . . .  . . . . . . you’re the warmth... ...in all these tears I’ve cried... ...may I take your suffering and griefs, and make them mine tonight... . . . …you’re the warmth... ...in all these tears I’ve cried... I’ll uphold you, with my righteous right hand, tonight... . . . . . . . . ...you’re the warmth... ...in all these tears I’ve cried... ...I’ll help you find a chord in your mind, that you can recite... . . . ...you’re the warmth... ...in all these tears I’ve cried... ...you’re what keep them burning bright... . . .  . . . . . . . . . . . . . ...it’s you that still rocks the cradle... ...and it’s your warmth I feel in the blue of the moon... ...and that’s what brings me back to you...  . . . . . . . "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" Mother Teresa |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
beautiful! had this strong man, shed a tear....... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"...when you want to sing but you can’t remember any song..." Oh, Noah, you do have a way with words that touches so deeply. You, provide the words and the music through your poetry and your songs. You truly are an earth angel. Love you! Your friend, Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Gahlee Noah...you really know how to touch  |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
 so beuatifully portrayed through your heartfelt words and pictures. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice Noah...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Noah Angel guy.....this really brought the flood right up in my eyes. Absolutely gracefilled, my friend.  ........jo |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
Noah this is so good you almost had me in tears. It is so true what this poem said. Poetry is beauty in words. |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
very well done! some of those places looked very familiar |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good write  |
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