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Open Poetry #36
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DennisTheMenace
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since 2005-09-04
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0 posted 2005-09-08 05:05 PM

Oh, how I wished I owned a car
Nothing fancy, just transportation.
I could take a date out to dinner,
Or a chick-flick to stir her emotion,
Go shopping the mall with no intent,
Even take a weekend down the ocean.
Ahh the freedom a vehicle would bring
Have wheels and always ready to go,
But I ain't getting a car any too soon
Because I've not the money on gas to blow.

sob
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Member Patricius
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just out of reach
1 posted 2005-09-08 07:00 PM

Ain't that the truth! Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg
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2 posted 2005-09-08 10:33 PM

heard ya loud and clear
Angelheart
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3 posted 2005-09-11 10:05 PM

wow me too lol aint it lol i liked this thanks for sharing....
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