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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2005-09-07 09:42 PM

The barbie doll

Call me mentally inept Barbie
What other words can I say to you?
Sometimes I question all of my self
When I sit next to the star wars toys
But I always smile and look good

It's a good thing I divorced ken doll
For plastic girls can't do too much
With frozen joints that can't ever move
Besides now there is that surfer boy
Overall I got to keep the dress.

But until then I sit here by Luke
I wait for the young girl to embrace me
Which is the only time I am real

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

[This message has been edited by Juju (09-08-2005 06:47 PM).]

© Copyright 2005 Juju - All Rights Reserved

sweetpoetess
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1 posted 2005-09-07 10:16 PM

This was very interesting. Enjoyed the read.

Poetry is beauty in words.

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2005-09-07 10:34 PM

To "be real" one has to 'get real' and I do believe that by writing this poem, you are becoming just that! ~ real!

EA

Juju
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In your dreams

3 posted 2005-09-07 10:38 PM

This poem is about the sepperation of my self and my body. And as well my self dealing with society.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

passing shadows
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4 posted 2005-09-08 08:24 AM

JuJu, sometimes that's hard to do, but you've done it well

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where the wild flowers grow

5 posted 2005-09-08 05:48 PM

I liked this, there were parts that made a whole lot of sense.. thanks.

Juju
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In your dreams

6 posted 2005-09-09 11:32 AM

I am glad you enjoyed my poem.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

iliana
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7 posted 2005-09-09 05:50 PM

Cute, Juju!

Juju
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In your dreams

8 posted 2005-09-11 02:04 PM

Thank you Iliana.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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