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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2005-09-07 12:03 PM

She who has been waiting
for her lover
    for desire of words
written on winds and sand

The arrival must be  certain
unfolding like a flower
in some lost  motion

Maybe the sky will keep you
from falling
having no say --
just walls and skin
&the smell
of tainted sheets

don't  keep the details
but know they exist

{all in different shades of yellow lines
and finer roads}

rather keep the clutter
of rain in your mind
            blue and empty
stuffed with false hope
and adoring means

~
Perhaps jaded
by your hands
until the light of morning
or the next flavor
settles upon your tongue

~~**~~
You're so vain
you probably think this
song is about you (CS)
~~**~~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2005-09-07 12:25 PM

Greeneyes
A lovely write, enjoyed.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-09-07 12:42 PM

Lovely this..
lovely you.
Beautiful new pic too!

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2005-09-07 03:10 PM

Yellow fits my mood well today L. As always, done with your eloquence sweet

sis...

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

4 posted 2005-09-08 08:23 AM

I pictured many shades of yellow as I read ....

but mostly waves of blonde across the sky ....

the bloom of a yellow rose for the day.

nice write!

CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2005-09-08 04:54 PM

Yet another "Lauren Lovely".
Much enjoyed. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2005-09-09 09:28 AM

thanks to you each, much love....huggsssss

~

Craig.... many shades of yellow but only one that sticks out.... kinda like 31 flavors, one for each day....cant decide on one, so toss them all away...hugsss

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2005-09-13 07:31 AM

For some reason, I thought of a yellow rose blooming today when I came back to read this.
Don't ask where it came from, but I can't think of anything more beautiful than this and YOU.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2005-09-13 09:36 AM

Hi Donna...

thank you...

hugsssss

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands
~~**~~

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