Open Poetry #36 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
haphazarding vanilla I knew your music's moisture like the tin can's carpeting and wore the rattles of nerves in my loose stringed boots mud stuck sucking a smile you said it was just you pressing the ends of suggestions into my rib pockets overall and god I wished for fingers deeper than just the brushing of perchances like the tides over sea grasses on the underside of some willing la jolla I knew your eyes instantly then like the photos in my wish book when it was the dream sifter's gift just to make me require more than my feathered famish could carry ______________ dark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
how nature so talks to us, doesn't she, and gives us an abundance of what we each so individually need...she is a shine of a soul mate, isn't she? Hugs and many thanks Lee J. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I like this Bodger |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
![]() My spirit will rise |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I think this is my favorite of yours..and will save it...just because~~ MM |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS "over sea grasses on the underside of some willing la jolla I knew your eyes instantly then" That is just so pretty!! ![]() |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
It's different and I had to read it twice... awesome. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Your writing is just as beautiful as always. I miss reading here. I am always drawn back to my favorites it seems. All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and god I wished for fingers deeper than just the brushing of perchances like the tides ~*~ You whisper well... ![]() |
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