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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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reaffirmation sunlight skirts into a winter paradise touching my face as though, it were his a multiple portrait gone to explore the world in the winds that break through my window testing the folklore of interest ravenous for a promised land drawing an unfilled sound to my fingers screaming words of sunset passion surrounds our souls like wolves circling, bridging tokens am i so forlorn, so hopeless? spare me leave or flesh against knife steal my senses to fulfill desires of some disneyland dimension give winter’s cold, close distance seated on climbing petals to run into some camera catching horizon leaning against me tearing at my driving force where dawn imagines light feeling more naked then alive in every piece of my mind before the touch of surprise, we both cal déjà vu deeper, deeper still give me the overdose spin the embers of transformation as i sit on some rust chained bungee cord ready to plunge into harshness into ripples of awakening nerve beating drum like a supported fall rare and invisible that i will not fail i will not fail… hitting bottom is the recourse apprehension only stings me... it is why I live |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ It is why you live. Enjoyed and good morning sweet.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
as i sit on some rust chained bungee cord ready to plunge into harshness Oh, wow... as I read through the lines, my eyes couldn't go fast enough. *S* This is excellent, dear lady! *S* |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Emotions in extreme, but always real. Bless you dear lady.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, that whirlwind of living! Gads...how you caught so much of the every day, the all there is, along with the unknown of tomorrow, and that unsung recourse of I think I can I think I can... and whirl it right into I know I will, I know I will... Kudos, lady. You deserve more...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
... Once again leaving me speechless and in awe. Love ya lady. Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ.....reaffirmation is a great word, and you made the poem great too!! I always enjoy you. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"give me the overdose spin the embers of transformation as i sit on some rust chained bungee cord ready to plunge into harshness into ripples of awakening" Understanding this well, LeeJ. ....jo |
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