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that KISS |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Words drift within the tides, losing language, sea and sky collide, lips reach, connect thru crosswinds, magic's bullet strikes blindside, hearts fly, surrender wingless, blessed children swept along the wind's great ride. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-08-2005 11:07 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 very nice |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ and I felt as though I was being swept right along with you!  Enjoyed the energy of this write!  EA |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
you know what is really great? when it happens with every kiss...not just the first.. Enjoyed this very much! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes..lovely this Michele.. I know the feeling... Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Lovely, -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah, what a write! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Mmm now THIS, is a nice kiss. Enjoyed poet ink mxx take bread away from me, if you wish, take air away. but do not take from me your laughter. |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
I enjoyed how each verse contained 2 parts... each using a distinct imagery to describe a single vision. |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
okey dokey |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
yeppers - love the sweeping  - enjoyed this inky S |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
if only they would all be so lovely . . . as this . . . |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
WOW! Michelle, I would like to be kissed like that, for sure!  ...jo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed that KISS...James |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kewl lipstick ms inky |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love Susan C's response.. A kiss is never "just a kiss" M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
salute.. this was upclose and personnel... Enjoyed |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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