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Open Poetry #36
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2005-09-05 04:27 PM


more
who would not dig a small hole
to save the world

telling all
how deep they are
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
SarBear
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since 2003-06-05
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1 posted 2005-09-05 07:14 PM

I like this a lot. You used very few words but managed to convey a large and deep point.
Martie
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2 posted 2005-09-05 07:17 PM

He does that all the time SarBear.  This one was really great!  You're the master, Haun!
Drauntz
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3 posted 2007-04-26 04:59 PM

still very good. a little poem a word "save" tells the love. a word of  "telling" shows the self-proud...the confidence.

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