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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-09-05 03:15 AM



Late at night
Slowly stars—

Even now
I raise my eyes

© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
LoveBug
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1 posted 2005-09-05 10:20 AM


This is a lovely little piece, packs quite a punch. I never managed to do anything with so few words.. you certainly have a talent. Keep looking up..

Love's a lovely lad
His bringing up is beauty
Who loves him not is mad
For I must pay him duty
-Anonymous

Angelheart
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2 posted 2005-09-11 10:08 PM


2 words for ya on this ...   Short and Sweet...
sweetpoetess
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3 posted 2005-09-11 10:12 PM


Short piece but beautifully written.

Poetry is beauty in words.
    

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2005-09-11 10:26 PM


Now this is beautiful!!!

I wait now at the lake or walking by the bay
I wait and listen or put a seashell
to my ear and it all comes back
the wind's soft murmur..and you.

Drauntz
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Los Angeles California
5 posted 2007-04-26 04:31 PM


homesick.


You have many Septembers in your calander. I can not find mine.

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