Open Poetry #36 |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
We give ourselves to this - The twilights kiss of awakening darkness...as the day folds against the night in a warm embrace. Nothing remains but a moment lost upon itself. Soon...night will enter fully. And we will step into its arms. Changed by this moment of surrender. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Another masterpiece, Eric. Beautiful! "Changed by this moment of surrender." Yes! And there are many such moments in a lifetime. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I'm with Honeybunch, Ericc....a masterpiece! .......jo |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
To Bodger |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous Eric as always you never fail |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I keep reading and re-reading the ending... yes... it is just so. *S* Beautiful write!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
In your eyes twilight reflects. Spellbound by this dance of light and shadow I surrender to the call of the night. I find my way into sweetness guided by your divine light, which is never hidden. I find access into the arms of love. Where all wounds heal where we reach nirvana. So so beautiful and inspiring, dear Eric! I love you, Margherita |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is lovely ....a true romantic... |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
uh uh yes indeed romantic I like it! thanks for sharing.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm pleased this one came back up as I was on vacation when you posted Eric. This one is very special...thank you. Hugs~Nancy Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric You made me think about moments and change...and how that each moment that passes, the next finds us changed. I think this is a good thing. As always your poetry is inspiring! |
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