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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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It’s It’s a whale of a tale And the end of a sail That falls from our heavens reign It’s a whale of a tale And the end of a sail That brings the buds to bud again Through wind and rain And headwinds pain We build our castles on the floor Through wind and rain And headwinds pain We build a dyke about its shore A heck of a blow When you come to know That there is fire in the core A heck of a blow When you come to know That’s all there is there is no more |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank God for that fire... and thank You! for fanning the flame!  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
always a joy for one in the am, another interesting read  My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine   MGROVES You are what you am. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I 'think' that I read this as relating to the blow that Katrina delivered ... right ? (Well, of course I'm right ... poetry IS about interpretation, now isn't it ?) No matter ... you rhyme the scheme of poetic dream~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Thank you for the read and reply. Hugs |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love the rhyming here Sy well done! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Glad you were passing bye. |
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