Open Poetry #36 |
Love Takes Two |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Love Takes Two You know she doesn't want you, you don't light her fire. When will your common sense outweigh your hearts desire? "But I love her and I need her, I hear my hearts refrain." Ah but she must love you too, romantic love takes two, how many times must I explain. JamesLee July07 2005 Don't worry, I'm fine. This is not a personal experience, at this time. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Probably something we have all needed to remember at some time in our life. Nice write. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad it's not personal good write |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Yes this was so heartfelt and touching , yes its so sad when love is one sided Hope |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Yes Yes! It does take two and unfortunately for me it was one-sided. I really liked this... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
yes, it definitely takes two...nice writing JamesM M |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Brillant! You've captured my thoughts perfectly. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you all for the wonderful responses...Yep, it takes two. If you find yourself doing all of the work, thats only one...and love takes two...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Your romanticism belongs on these pages on this day of *gifting* the heart~ Happy Valentine's Day~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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