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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-07-08 03:40 AM



Love Takes Two


You know she doesn't want you,
you don't light her fire.
When will your common sense
outweigh your hearts desire?

"But I love her and I need her,
I hear my hearts refrain."

Ah but she must love you too,
romantic love takes two, how
many times must I explain.


JamesLee
July07
2005
Don't worry,
I'm fine.
This is not
a personal
experience,
at this time.


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Dee
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1 posted 2005-07-08 05:34 AM


Probably something we have all needed to remember at some time in our life.
Nice write.

Dee

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passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-07-08 06:10 AM


glad it's not personal

good write

HopeS
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3 posted 2005-07-08 11:13 AM


Yes this was so heartfelt and touching , yes its so sad when love is one sided

Hope

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4 posted 2005-07-08 11:24 AM


Yes Yes! It does take two and unfortunately for me it was one-sided.

I really liked this...

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2005-07-08 11:27 AM


yes, it definitely takes two...nice writing JamesM

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J. K. Mitchell
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6 posted 2005-07-08 12:23 PM


Brillant!

You've captured my thoughts perfectly.

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2006-02-14 02:16 AM


Thank you all for the wonderful responses...Yep, it takes two.  If you find yourself doing all of the work, thats only one...and love takes two...James
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8 posted 2006-02-14 01:53 PM




Your romanticism belongs on these pages on this day of *gifting* the heart~

Happy Valentine's Day~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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