Open Poetry #36 |
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Wind Whispers |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores ![]() |
Wind Whispers ~*Marge Tindal*~ She is the wind in whispers, across the plain of memories “Come feel me again.” says she “I live in breaths of your ecstasy.” “I caress the days of old with memories of your gentle recall.” “I am the wind in whispers keeping the beauty of your all.” “Swirling back to greet you on a day of soft remind.” “These are the rewind moments kept for the all of time.” “For I am wind … I know all things.” “On just a breeze … I can bring remembering embers to warm you when the night has fallen chill” “I am wind, whispering warmly to you still.” “Let my currents surround you, holding you tenderly, for I am wind … I know all things.” “I am wind … I give you wings.” ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
How precious, Marge. A windfall of gentle reminders. Thank you for sharing. Rae |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Magical and mysterious, Marge my friend. Corinne |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Very beautiful! The wind has always seemed "otherworldly" to me! Love Betty Lou |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Beautiful |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
What a beautiful poem you have shared with us! I've always loved the feel of a gentle wind. Love, Patricia 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Dear Marge The wind always catches my breath and this verse of yours left me breathless, so to speak! What a wonderful poem, indeed! Love Isobel xo |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh, this is good to see......and I see it, thanks to the luscious way you wrote this! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very beautiful. Eric |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
Beautiful It's only a tragedy after we bleed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching write Marge how'd I miss it? well, no matter. I found it now ![]() |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I hear her whispering thru this beautiful piece, Marge! ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I sincerely thank you all ... this one just blew gently through my ink~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is absolutely lovely! *S* |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The wind is certainly a mystic and a magical grace. Uplifting write...well done Marge. TD |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
always beautifull~ a breath of fresh air you give along with light brings smiles and a day of peace~ My spirit will rise |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
What a serene poem this is! I think I'll earmark it for a day I need to hear that wind again. A real beauty! miscellanea |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky Marge...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
“Let my currents surround you, holding you tenderly, for I am wind … I know all things.” “I am wind … I give you wings.” Very beautifully expressed, dear Marge! The wind carries your poetic voice with true grace. Love and hugs. Margherita ![]() |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
this is good...thanks for sharing...... |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
beautiful ![]() |
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