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My Epitaph
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My Epitaph |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My Epitaph My epitaph is but a word A dot within the human herd It is an ember of a coal That makes the crust germane my soul The earth that will my dust of grime Was mine to till a certain time And I did live upon its sand And touched the essence with my hand I lived a talisman of life Danced the music of its fife Walked upon the souls of dead And fed the oven of my head And all the forces given me Were courses of my mental tea? Which took apart the arms of why And looked into the needles eye It’s there I found the wake of sun The trinity that makes for one |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
rhyme divine Sey. Well done. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Yep. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit Thank you dear. Sunshine   |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ya know, this just goes to prove, how each and every individual, in there own time, their own way...and you sir, well, me thinks you were wise the moment you were born...hehe...hugs and thank you for a really great song this morn... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You've placed a laurel on my head, thank you dear. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Seymour, love your words my friend, thanks for sharing once again. Sincerely Rick |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rick My pleasure my friend. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T., might I suggest that your single-word epitath be, "Sonneteer". That one word encompasses the very essence of thee. Mind you, please do not be in a hurry to use it!!!! Loveya, Angel hugs 'n kisses, EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (08-31-2005 12:56 PM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Earth Angel is right.... I think it is. Lovely, sir!  ....jo |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Seymour this is excellent writing! Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel There is no rush. iliana Thank you my dear. Ericc A nice comment indeed. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I agree with Earth Angel...you are a sonneteer of the highest order...your sonnets are perfection and a pure joy to read...*big hugs* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 Thank you for the read and kind words. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Double the "YEP" Well done Sir Sy of Tabin. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, Thank you my friend. |
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