Open Poetry #36 |
To Touch A Brighter Star (RP) |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh, but to touch that brighter star there, shining in a far off galaxy distant in the future. If I could reach past that source of your pain and sprinkle stardust that has floated down from the heavens and blow it gently across the trails that you walk in hopes that perhaps tomorrow your steps could fall lighter so that you might tread softer upon that path within. I would fly straight through the heavens holding your hand to make all of your dreams come true. Dance! Oh how we would dance and the Gods in celestial skies would be jealous when Luna shone her light upon two souls held in harmonies delight. There are stars~ millions in the universe but yours.... yours shines brighter than those that just hang there clinging........to the darkness. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This can have several meanings. I'm going to hold on tightly to the one I see here... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
hey sometimes, clinging to the darkness shows one the light.....I too, see several meaning within this....you are beautiful for each.... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Words from a friend make a difference....I'm sure whomever you wrote this for knows you are there for them. Enjoyed.....jo |
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