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Open Poetry #36
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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time
0 posted 2005-08-29 07:18 AM

A romantic is there but reality I suppose, takes preference


Where would mentality be
If is was you or me
Where would life be safe
With the ego and the waste
Where do you begin
I left again on the wind
Not by choice you forced me out
And proud of it
I have no doubt
Where does your mentality lie
And you stop those lies your mentality aspires
To Decide

Where would you begin
On a dream of make believe
That you can make it sin
And feel dirty

As others begin
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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2005-08-29 08:51 AM

quote:
Where would life be safe


Complex poem. We can feel safe inmidst of disasters of all kinds. But life is still always fragile, there is no place to be safe from attacks to our physical and psychological integrity.

Love,
Margherita
Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2005-08-29 10:00 AM

We are as always vunerable

Thanks for your incisive reply

Bodger
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