Open Poetry #36 |
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negative ions |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia ![]() |
I need to bathe in a deluge of negative ions ~regenerate me, renew me, refresh me~ to wash away the sins of the day (and mind you, I don't believe in sin) split the air with a charge of forgiveness whisper me away from the harsh notes of reality I wish to wrap myself up in a blanket of negative ions to be recharged in a positive place of the heart and mind so I seek a waterfall, a tumbling stream of thoughts, reaffirmation there is a positive for each negative |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: It is imperative to detach, otherwise we can't cope rationally with the problems. I think all of us can relate to your need to be recharged positively. Your poem renders your mood perfectly well. Great work! Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
![]() yep, keeping my mind's eyes on refreshing streams |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Deserves another round! Love, Margherita ![]() ![]() |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes, indeed lady, there truly is...its just sometime, the night is way to dark, and we all need someone like you, to help us see....hugs you...and thank you |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh Kacy - this is mine, can I have it? Please? It is beauty. You should put this in the discussion thread. It made me feel so so much at peace, it really did. I needed this, its beautiful. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I just loved this poem! I have been looking into purchasing a 'negative ionizer' for myself! I am into little fountains and waterfalls in my home. I love the atmosphere before, during and after a rainfall. I used to live by the ocean and the negative charge there is unforgettable! Negatives truly can be positive! ~ What a charge! ![]() ![]() EA |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
WOW....I know what you mean, Kacy....exactly! ![]() |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ok, Sue, you can keep it because I'm counting on it to recycle, regenerate itself ![]() and for Katrina's victims? SIGH ~We shall overcome~ [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (08-31-2005 09:41 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Kacy . . . this one sure needs to breathe . . . we all do. *waving my freak flag too* ![]() |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
a wake up call to both the fragility of gift of each breathe we take on the new day |
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