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the light of a trap door
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the light of a trap door |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I don't wanna die like this rocking in mid curvature just because my chin was cursed by this swerve of nod and worse there is drool drip down the side of my dead lopsided grin and I don't wanna whine like this- flip the page of Sears and then season's change as models grin proper in white cotton briefs as if they were au natural and happenstance had winked a glimpse of them in their underwear with paddles and a ping pong grin colorize a blush on her take the grapes from him congealed and this is bigger that is blessed as they pose a betterless equality and unity of eyes which swerve in open ness here into my troubled mind: janis trickles on the cry tremble legs the newborn foal leaning into echoes sold posed much bolder as she rolled rock of iron butterfly and "wha-ah-ah-a-ha-ha-why?" she sang the words that slow. Wings with secret whistlings of holes within my arguments and I don't wanna die like this drowning in the proof of it oh-I-need-a-man-to-love and I don't wanna live like this Gurley missing every cue but oh you know I'd wear the blue fringe and croon the microphone to blow with gutterals brief stage lights and filterings witnessing the "oh" I ask: "I don't wanna die like this" rasp the gasp and boom eclipse the light of a trap door as I beg applause for "more". |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
You never cease to amaze me. Your words are like spells. I never know anything intelligent to say   If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
you aint goin no place but AWAY from there. And I always told you - you ARE Janis and Grace mixed altogether as three . . . I cant believe you posted here this morning, sheesh. If you come East, you are welcome here. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Karen, perfect as always. I am so concerned for you....I hope you have left by now and are on safer ground. love you.....jojo [This message has been edited by iliana (08-28-2005 10:02 PM).] |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Applauding the lady who does laundry, cooks, and writes until she finally says, "okay let's lock the damn door!" Be safe m'friend, and for you all I pray. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very interesting..much enjoyed the read! hugs, g |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
gah! How do you do it?  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karen You have light all around you....you don't need no trap door!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Even though I don't fully grasp the meaning of certain expressions, I do feel the atmosphere and that means that you, the poet, have perfectly succeeded in involving me in your emotions. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Wings with secret whistlings of holes within my arguments" makes it hard to fly.... and I don't wanna die like this drowning in the proof of it oh-I-need-a-man-to-love and I don't wanna live like this this stanza touched me in places I don't like to look at... you are amazing and I love you muchly. be safe and you know you have a place here if need be.."too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
WHOA...Karen your an astounding writer!!!  Simply amazing |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
***standing ovation*** ~baby **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
*applauding* Brava K. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
K, you just prove over and over again that you are a brilliant star, a first class song and dance! And a misbehavin weather witch can't hold a candle to your glow! |
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