Open Poetry #36 |
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The music makers |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa ![]() |
When the music’s here the makers cast their vibes like a duo of magicians working magic in the sky and the storm recedes, a chastised energy sent to lick its wounds over an empty sea. Too soon, too soon, the sea becomes my feel looking up and sensing life’s lack of harmony growing larger, larger, with weighted disdain and moving closer, closer, the essence of pain. But when the music’s here I touch on spirit lands reverently like a bride welcomes in her man and sideways move a dream past the love in me for in a dream the power to override the real. Sky rumbles! Is it thunder or an accolade for me or celebratory drum rolls in place of love’s release, and now there is the rain, pitter-patter, gentle slow, and I know the music makers can see into my soul. They are the sun and sons of a woman in the know, my midnight oil and stars … and the reason I feel old but music burns the bridges between the weak and strong like the flames of love justify a world gone wrong. The makers and their music, love and lovers true for one without the other like sky without the blue! Helen / 8 July 2005 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Helen? There's a special place in my library... for you... and this ![]() "There's a reason they call God The Creator - he sides with talent."Julia Cameron |
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SoundWaves Member
since 2005-06-22
Posts 113Center Stage |
Great write Helen!!! ![]() The spotlight can only get brighter. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
WhooHoo!!! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Helen, this is superb! I'm sending it to my music maker because I know she will appreciate the depth of it. ![]() |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Bessed are the music makers for they hath made us smile. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I have to pay special tribute to this wonderful piece of writing, as I am a musician, and this one just caught me up and made me smile!!! Thank you for this one, my friend!! ~S~ Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you all for the read made possible by Dixie bringing it back up. There's something special about musicians - all of them - because they do indeed work magic. |
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