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Open Poetry #36

Rescued By A Demon

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-08-24 10:32 PM

Tweak and twist
tantalize me with your
wick and wilds. invade
me once again

Take me to another place
of doomsday where the dark
clouds find me and rain
ever so hard down upon
my pale slender face.

Abuse me lighten strikes
I fall to the ground the
dirt is wet and I lay about
without making a sound.

A gentlemen caller comes
to rescue me pick me up
and then he forsakes me

Enter his dungeon of broken
dreams and hearts once again
maybe I'll learn this time

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2005-08-25 07:56 AM

I have been called a demon a few times
let me get out my cape..(

this was interesting to get into...enjoyed it

stevebrklynnyc
Member

since 2004-01-04

Posts 292
GA, Camden

2 posted 2005-08-25 08:28 AM

I love the post, especially the last line, enjoyed

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-08-25 10:05 AM

just goes to prove, even though we may blame the demon, "we" are the product of our own choice...
This reminded me of the heaty Phantom of the Opera...and who wouldn't fall in love with him?

Hugs and well done

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-08-25 10:40 AM

I know what you mean

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

5 posted 2005-08-25 10:46 AM

thanks everyone fory our replies

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2005-08-25 11:22 AM

Foxy One ~

Kind of a 'kewl' poem! ~ and yes, I do hope you learn from those lessons that keep comin' your way!

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

7 posted 2005-08-25 11:30 AM

One can only hope

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

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