Open Poetry #36 |
All the pretty flowers/ If you only knew me |
Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
#1 All the pretty flowers I care not of the blossoms opening I just want to hear The echo of the loon near While his feet kisses The ripples, he almost misses Even though cherry trees Which don’t freeze, are rare and please… #2 If you only knew me I want you to know I watch the sun set And I know the way the sun Reflects off the surface Of subtle ripples The way the trees Will catch the light And how I lay beneath Counting the changing constellation I hold most dear the sound Of the incoming waves For she is my mother And I stand in silence If I were a dove I would embrace the Grace of sacrifice Never tell me again I care for naught Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (; [This message has been edited by Juju (12-19-2005 07:14 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetPoetess~ 'I hold most dear the sound Of the incoming waves For she is my mother And I stand in silence' You brought memories of my own dear mother cresting homeward to my heart~ She was (and still is) the gentle sound of the waves pounding on the shoreline of my heart~ Thank you for this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"I just want to hear The echo of the loon near While his feet kisses The ripples, he almost misses" smiling... I love this! |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
This is good Juju |
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