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for people who enjoy seclusion |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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for people who enjoy seclusion pleasantly flamboyant he holds me in our wedding villa off beat & simple table for one, with a suspense novel curling around our toes i found the lone coyote howling with a smile while pointing towards that mountain with our name and the “do unto others” passage carved right across the top unperturbed years of wedlock he and i… this chalet offered us, finest amenities rustic, splendid, with no snippiness of surprise we are a found autumn open eye, with laser surgery guiding us through the dust about the beginner who can excel “thank god for this new testament” lighting us like incense teaching me rowdy martial arts i’ve thrown away the door mate and rapid fire rants loving both the male and female part of us… this is a “not-for-profit” institute standing amidst a whole new world with arms of seclusion, firmly & lovingly, wrapped around my waist looking over a posh garden ocean with rose colored breath my animus, sings to me, an old song “getting to know you” soft and sweet toothed i am his geisha, he’s my nameless man yet my wild and famous twin we’re a crystal sete filled with that new york state of mind akin |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Know what you mean, LeeJ. The metaphors in this blow me away!  ....jo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ You write with new amazement at life, and an old souls eyes. Marvelous!! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
First of all, Lee, you write with prose/poetry and I love that. Second, this read to me first, as the most beautiful place I could ever wish to place myself in. Third, I also saw this as one self realizing both halves, you know? you always leave me thinking, thank you for that. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've been figuring out how best to respond to this, or at least, leave a comment worthwhile. But littlewing did it for me. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lee, I enjoyed reading your poem. As I've told you before, you make me feel as if I'm right there going through whatever it is you're writing about. That, to me, makes a good writer. Thank you, Sweetie. Hugs,  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Lee , I love the getting to know you line , we sure do get to know you and your wonderful expressed feelings Hope |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I always find at least one line I wish I could buy from you--today it's this: "we are a found autumn open eye" wow I can munch on that one line for days, Lee. lovely! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
loved the title! and wow, the poem is just stunning, many great lines in this |
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