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Open Poetry #36

a few new cinquains

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 2005-08-23 03:18 AM

1)

ocean-
sing me wet songs,
whisper me deep secrets,
seduce me with sub-marine green -
take me

2)

tightly
I hold to this,
the one truth of my life:
our hearts were made to beat together -
soulmates

3)

sensual
am I when you
breathe softly in my ear,
make me sigh and shiver within
your arms

4)

above
wind and water,
sweeping through morning clouds,
my spirit soars on deep purple tides
of love

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2005-08-23 12:15 PM

Beki~
Each one beautiful ... this one my favorite -

'tightly
I hold to this,
the one truth of my life:
our hearts were made to beat together -
soulmates '

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email [email protected]

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2005-08-23 12:38 PM

Beki, these cinquins were poetry in graceful and soulful motion. Each one stands as a masterpiece in its own right!

Love & Light,
Linda

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

3 posted 2005-08-24 02:38 AM

thank you ladies your comments are much appreciated

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

4 posted 2005-08-24 08:40 AM

..hi Beki..these are all very good..bravo!

spiros

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