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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Until My heart pounds to this day's rhythm, each a moment out of need. My words, they hold in nakedness the morning mourning's feed. Death waits and clings to tears in code. Support, my own, to give. I'm shadowed by the shadow's take. This painful life I live. I search the face of flowers plain, for plain is what I be. The simpleness where beauty lies is what I wish to see. Emotions tie me up in knots exhaustive pushing on. Directions pull away from you when touch of love is gone. Whatever happens, happens now. Unfolding, I am still. To free the spirit, worth the ache my words are all...until. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
heh: The simpleness where beauty lies is what I wish to see. look in the mirror . . . I can more than relate to your words. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Unfolding, I am still. To free the spirit, worth the ache my words are all...until. ~ touching Maureen....  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you know I know  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Whatever happens, happens now. Unfolding, I am still. To free the spirit, worth the ache my words are all...until." And words are therapeutic...someday the tune will change; hang in there. ....jo |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
My words, they hold in nakedness the morning mourning's feed. Wonderfully rhymed and enjoyable to read. I especially enjoy the line above. "If this grand panaorama before me is what you call God... then God is not dead." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sue, thank you...it's nice to know someone can relate...this isn't entirely a sad poem though... I feel promise in the air  Lauren, nice to see you...hope all is well in your world~ thanks Dixie, I know you know... hugs Jo, I think that tune is in the process of changing..although there will be some sadness to accompany it...but that is a part of life... Thank you for your thoughts Mike...it is great to see you on here after such a long time gone...hope you are enjoying your new life. That line was due to waiting and wondering if death of a family member will accompany my morning...my father-in-law is in the hospital still after 20 days, not getting better, not getting worse... M |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
... unfolding, I am still ... wishing you all the best Maureen now, always, not just until .... CT |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Maureen, this is so beautiful. And, I understand so well what you mean. |
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