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| Open Poetry #36 |
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Bloodtears |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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She cried she cried she cried they snuck behind her rolling in busying herself with pinks, blues and violet canvas created by the marina from her smile the dusk of day until they struck electric a lover's touch icicles rained splashing my face kissing my forehead as I watched voyeur It was passion, unbridled. and the loneliest moment of my life. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I know exactly what you mean. This is the feeling I don't have my dear Love with me. Hugs, Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Looking from the outside in, can bring on some lonely tears at times...  Linda |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Excellent! Beginning to end... enjoyed -----------ice ><> |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"and the loneliest moment of my life" oh yes...perfection.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
littlewing A big fly for a littlewing, enjoyed. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
busying herself with pinks, blues and violet canvas created by the marina from her smile the dusk of day ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ how cool is that! love the personification and imagery in this...as always your poetry is so uniquely you and thats a very cool thing.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
icicles rained splashing my face kissing my forehead as I watched.... ... the loneliest moment of my life. touched me~~ M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This was bitten off just at the right places... Excellent Sue... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks guys, you know I truly appreciate you guys reading and especially with such honest replies. I was watching a rainstorm come in by myself and it was, utterly, truly beautiful, yet sad to be watching it alone. Thanks again guys. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Littlewing, This is amazing. Poetic beauty. I love it. How do you do that???? You have a gift for sure. SG |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
sometimes even when lonely we find beauty...  |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
it always hits me when I see a couple sitting closed to each other in a car, and I am always by myself.......sigh powerful write |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very moving piece sue I was afraid of what it would be, just by the title, but I'm glad I explored |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
you guys are so good to me to see such beauty in something I thought was rather sad. Thank you for the smiles. Dix? you know me . . . if it was something really bad, would be in another spot. So happy you guys liked. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yep! It can make one feel alone...and terribly small when the sky is so very aroused |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
 i understand i feel it watching the sunset over the atlantic, knowing an ocean separates me from the dreamlover that has yet to come for me |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
my goodness......much passion here. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
You have this tendency to make me cry, by the way I finally did it...I broke the cycle... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I don't know why but I love those lonely times, and seem to really hate them to end. (love Ed's comment - an aroused sky is a poem in itself isn't it?) Please another I-spy for us.  |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
one against the storm power and beauty and loneliness sigh great poem sue but now I think about this damn hurricane smile deadly beauty |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You are so gifted in your words Suzie, you don't just write... you ARE poety in motion dearest Littlewinged Suzie that soars... This? Is a  sweetie. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Goodness, I never thought this one moment of my own would reach so many of you. Thank you. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your awe and the deep melancholy have become mine through your powerful and masterful lines, dear Sue. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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