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just like heaven (repost)
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just like heaven (repost) |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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secrets pirouette upon my flesh faeries rest heavy upon my eyelids unspoken converstations linger upon my lips intrigue burning my thoughts like hot candle wax... ...your words... bring my collapsing cynicism to a gasping halt... deep breath... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a gripping ending wow |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"...your words... bring my collapsing cynicism to a gasping halt... deep breath..." Isn't that the way it should be??  I know that's the way I wanted it...Make me believe..even if it's only in you. Oh hey. I might use that...I call copy rights!!! LOL.... "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ceinwyn Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
most of the time, our spouses are the only ones we can believe in...our lover, friend, mentor...or should be...this was enriching... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
big sigh! lovely! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"...your words... bring my collapsing cynicism to a gasping halt... deep breath..." ~ I just took in one of my own! What a marvellous ending! Hugs with love, EA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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