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Open Poetry #36

you shook me to the core.

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2005-08-20 12:29 PM

i've been thinking
lately

and i've been feeling
lately

what it's like
to be alone

i had a dream
that you held me
"it shook you to the core didn't it?"
that's all you said to me
"it shook you to the core didn't it?"

i had a dream
that we danced in the snow
you wore white
and i wore black
i lost you
to the night

be careful
i'll cross my heart
and
burn my bridges
but you'll never leave me
because

you shook me to the core.

i needed to write something today
anything
i lay in bed too much.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2005-08-20 12:50 PM

Enjoyed...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-08-20 03:08 PM

nice when they do that, ain't it?

well...sometimes

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2005-08-20 03:41 PM

Now see I took this an entirely different way. I read of an egotistical man who figures he has control, and a woman who finally realized she can make it in the world on her own and that he really doesn't shake her to her very core.

Then again, what do I know?

Men when that would be said to a man about a dream he wouldn't think of just simply walking over and holding the person - oh no! They even like to think the can control dreams

Just kidding, well sort of.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2005-08-21 10:00 AM

Get out of bed, m'dear...
and write more!

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