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Open Poetry #36

Lamentation

JesusChristPose
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since 2005-06-21

Posts 777
Pittsburgh, Pa

0 posted 2005-08-19 11:56 PM

I could say the wind cries a lamentation
Or I could blame it on a demon

... a demon that falls into autumn

Or I could say...

Run away from it all
Before the breath of
the Winter Dragon

Cover's us all...

A lamentation
for the loss of
the Summer Angel

Conquered by

The Demon of the Fall

"I have gone away. The bed is cold and empty. Trees bend their boughs toward the earth. And nighttime birds float as black faces."

[This message has been edited by JesusChristPose (08-20-2005 02:24 PM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-08-20 07:27 AM

damn!

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-08-21 09:49 AM

And where would you run
where the ice wouldn't nip,
feel the tenuousness
of the coming slip,
know that the ice
would leave the specter
of a forthcoming spring's
early necter...

tell me,
where would you run?

~*~

Smiling at you...
I thought my muse was gone...
but you kickstarted her.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2005-08-21 10:26 AM

the Winter Dragon

would enjoy that right about now~~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

4 posted 2005-08-21 11:03 AM

I have to tell you, JCP, this line really grabbed my attention "the wind cries a lamentation"!

That was so darn 'poetical'! Yes, indeed the wind can cry a lamentation! ~ and so can you!!!

Terrific poem!

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