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Open Poetry #36

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SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

0 posted 2005-08-19 05:35 PM

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Dreaming at the edge of summer
    while leaves rock-a-bye
The sun takes a deep breath as
    it decends into her cradle
making way for the new moon

I sit and ponder days gone by
    thinking of earlier smiles
Fall is soon to be here reminding
    me that all things change
It is nature's way of renewal
    and I am her child

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-08-19 06:20 PM

love it

thank you

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

2 posted 2005-08-19 07:43 PM

No

I want to see you take this deeper explore the images and emotions

Do it for the readers

Bodger

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

3 posted 2005-08-20 12:36 PM

P.S. thank you.

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

4 posted 2005-08-20 12:36 PM

Bodger,

O.K. I will. Thanks for the input, appreciated.

SG

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