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Open Poetry #36
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-08-19 11:08 AM


In dawn blue air
With white mist
Gliding among the trees

An autumn moon looking on
One fragile little flower
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passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-08-19 11:23 AM

lovely scene here
Drauntz
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2 posted 2007-04-27 01:48 AM

one breath, so beautiful.

I seen the scene before. this is like fresh air goes directly into my soul and to make it calm.
so beautiful!!!!
a picture is more than 1000 words
but a poem is more than 1000 pictures.

you are truly you. real.
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