Open Poetry #36 |
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Waiting |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Waiting So! What is this all about Life is but a lonely shout A cry for love and warmth Why then the pain of earth Shall I dwell in depths of despair Seeking refuge in obscurity's lair Mentoring needs for calm In desperate times of harm When winds blow and seas ravage Destroying plains of emotions Years of fighting mind and age Must I stand amidst life's commotion They, the great, have been and gone Time has ousted their trusted belief Wasted away their fragile skeletal bone As academes move in with vulture's grief Do I wait for my time to speak Whilst my world is abandoned To an exclusive alien bent to wreck The very foundations I longed I do not wait for you to crush me For I have stood the test of time My voice speaks a truth you deny For you ask why I keep waiting!Why Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you have mirrored my thoughts of late great write here, loved the ending |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
An interesting write, Daniel. Who is this alien? "To an exclusive alien bent to wreck The very foundations I longed" |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I like this Bodger |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Midnitesun, The "alien" you will find is in the tears of children being orphaned by evil forces hellbent on destroying our foundations, our freedom. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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